Thursday, May 14, 2009

There's An App For That

First submission of our completed iPhone commercial. We will have the last 2 weeks of the quarter to fix and perfect it.

2 comments:

  1. This is awesome!! The guy talking has a really soothing voice- perfect with the music. Beautiful Maya'in!
    My only critiques are:
    In the end, his voice trails off and I wish I knew what he was saying!

    And the type effects in the credits are way too cheesy. A nice clean Helvetica with a fade in/out would probably be more appropriate.
    Does somebody yell something at the end?? haha YOU ARE TOO AWESOME!!

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  2. Thanks Courtney! Yea, there are still several things we need to fix... it WAS a group project, so I didn't have 100% creative input. The next version with be just about perfect, after taking in to account lots of comments from our professor and friends like you!

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